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Thursday, June 27, 2019
Friday, June 14, 2019
This is wont I made this week for writing and it was about a boy and a girl.the
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1: Begins with ‘Once upon a time…’ and introduces the main character
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Once upon a time there was a little man, he had now family it was just him on his own.
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2: Describe where the character lived
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He lived in an old,ancient,secret tower that had been used by other pour,old people in a humongous,massive.
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3: Describe the character’s special talent
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She was a very fast runner.
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4: Describe the characters problem
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She had now friends or family or food or water.
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5: Tell why the character felt that way
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She felt really sad and she was really mad.
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6: The final sentence tells how the character solved the problem
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Then they went to go and went for a walk and then they saw each other and then they went to the shop and then they got marridie and lived happaly after.
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